This is a poem that I wrote in the form of a rondeau redoublé. It’s called “My Garden Stands”.

This is a poem that I wrote in the form of a rondeau redoublé. It’s called “My Garden Stands”.

In 2021 I wrote a sestina about the refreshing that Jesus has to offer those who trust in Him. This week I re-wrote the poem in the form of a French roundelay, where the rhyming patterns of each stanza interlock and the last rhyming couplets have a repetitive echo.
This poem is based on two Hebrew words that begin with the n-sounding letter, nun (נ); the first, a verb, is nafash, which means to refresh. (Its noun form, nefesh, is the Hebrew word for soul.) The second term, nishb’rei-lev means ‘broken-hearted’, a word that conveys the sense of someone being a victim of another person’s destructive malice. I shall let the poem speak for itself. May it bless you.
God bless, Nahum.


This is a pantoum that I wrote in June of 2023 named In a Garden Tilled with Joy. I loved writing it and it even brings tears to my eyes. May it bless you. Nahum.

